Whirled Affairs

Malachy writes in a really good structure. I like one quote he wrote, which is "I didn't have anything to do with your mothers, so I"m not responsible for your plight. Find your f****** fathers and make them pay up and look after you." I heard this line before. It wasn't quite like this one but my freind's step dad told him to find his real dad so he could go live with him. This quote was really effective when I heard it. My freind got hurt and told me that he would never respect his step dad anymore. I also like how Malachy puts his people that he talks to into a dialogue. I think that he does a really good job when he seperates the dialogues and the paragraphs. He also uses different terms, such as says. He replaces it with sez for example, "Why don't you remove that picture altogether, and not be giving praticing collapse catholics palpitations in thier secret hearts?" "sez I". He uses sez as if it is says, but just in a different term. I also like how he tries to go and find his true father.